Feedback on pitch

Our feedback was largely positive, our main point to develop was our narrative and locations. This is what we anticipated and we are pleased that our core idea is suitably executable. Good ideas which came from feedback were:
Use rain in the video and make it either slower or fall backwards.
Use a river so the water looks like its not moving very fast.
Use busy roads to film traffic and make it go faster or slower.
Use a busy street and walk backwards so when you replay it in reverse it looks like everyone is walking backwards except for the main character.
We think using water in the video would be a good idea because there are lots of references to water in the song.